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  1. #1
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    Mascot's words need editing

    Just saw the floating mascot down in the bottom right corner. You should be aware that the words in the speech bubble read like the author doesn't speak English as their first language.
    You are not owning an account yet. So why not take 2 minutes and REGISTER RIGHT NOW?!
    Sorry. Grammar Nazi here.

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    Re: Mascot's words need editing

    I saw that. In my head, I read a 'simples' on the end too x3
    Currently working on Runic Legends
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    Re: Mascot's words need editing

    I will edit this tonight, I used it from the author of the modification.

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    Re: Mascot's words need editing

    Better, but the punctuation is now wrong. It currently reads:
    It seems you have not joined yet, take a moment to: REGISTER RIGHT NOW?!
    The correct version would be:
    It seems you have not joined yet. Take a moment to REGISTER RIGHT NOW!
    You may also want to centralise the text.

    Sorry for being so anal.

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    Re: Mascot's words need editing

    Thanks. I have fixed it now.

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    Re: Mascot's words need editing

    Almost there. It now reads:
    It seems you have not joined yet. Take a moment to REGISTER RIGHT NOW?!
    You just need to get rid of the question mark.

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    Re: Mascot's words need editing

    I'll fix that in the morning.

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    Re: Mascot's words need editing

    Don't forget about this.

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    Re: Mascot's words need editing

    I did fix it about 5 minutes after posting, you might have to do a hard refresh of your browser.

 

 

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